Hi Haamiora, I really liked how you described the homeless man. You gave a lot of detail it made me draw a image of what it would look like in my head.Maybe next time you could make the text bigger so its easier to read, other then that I thought that this was really amazing.
Hi Haamiora,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you described the homeless man. You gave a lot of detail it made me draw a image of what it would look like in my head.Maybe next time you could make the text bigger so its easier to read, other then that I thought that this was really amazing.
Great work
From Atalina